United Clubs

Speech voting results:

 1-Poor, 5-Excellent

 Was it interesting - 4,73
 Was it easy to understand - 4,73
 Was it well prepared - 4,80

Video

Comments

Please find below short summery of your strong and weak points during your presentation.
+ clear voice. It was easy to hear you from all parts of the audience. Also it worse to mention your good voice dynamics. You changed your intonations during different parts of you presentation and attract people attention by this instrument
+ most part of self presentations are based on simple story about person. "I work...I like ..." and so on. This is quite boring. You made another format. Your story about your city was really interesting and had clear message.
+ you had clear structure. Lots of people during self-presentation jump from one part to another and
- you looked at your slides more than 20 times. Actually this is a problem, because each time when you look at slide you lose you eye contact with audience and need to receive this connection again and again
- try to move a little bit during you presentation

Recommendations

On this stage when you just joined our club we could only recommend you to try different types of presentations. For example - informative presentation, sales presentation, motivation techniques and so on. We will give you feedback about all of them and you could find your weak point.